Hello-Vahlent here from the Writer's Workshop. My Piece, Bachy Jim, received several positive comments, and I thank you all for those.
I will welcome and encourage you to use 'both barrels' when critiquing anything that I post in this Forum. That is the only way I will learn as a writer and you will learn as a potential Editor. It will be a privilege to have you as an audience for my writing.
Regarding the WW, I found the following to be the most challenging:
Galumphing and Bricolage (Ch. 5)
Anti-Cliche Exercise (Ch. 70
I have done a few of these and may post some in this Forum for your critique.
I will welcome and encourage you to use 'both barrels' when critiquing anything that I post in this Forum. That is the only way I will learn as a writer and you will learn as a potential Editor. It will be a privilege to have you as an audience for my writing.
Regarding the WW, I found the following to be the most challenging:
Galumphing and Bricolage (Ch. 5)
Anti-Cliche Exercise (Ch. 70
I have done a few of these and may post some in this Forum for your critique.